show not tell

This is a story Is about  show not tell. And all the colored in parts kind of show were I am   I,m  trying to show my story not tell hope you enjoy reading                                                                                                                                                                                Frost covered everything. The wind blew. There were goosebumps all around me. The lights went out. I shouted “STOP!”like the red color  traffic lights. I could not see through the mist as there were shadows everywhere. What could it be ????? I questioned myself as I got hit by the tree on my head . I went deeper into the dark and then... “AHHHHH” Somebody came out from behind the tree. He or she said “how are you."  He had red eyes sharp teeth and long hair like a girl.  I picked up a stick and hit him in the head. Suddenly, I noticed I was lost. The person I saw was actually alive! He or she said “eat the human.” And chased chased me all the way home. When I reached the door I locked the door closed the curtains and never went out until morning.I dreamed all night about were I was who he was and what happen. When I reached the door. I locked it and never went outside until morning.