persuasive writting

During the lockdown, we had to do persuasive writing. In my writing I had tried to do some different sentence types they are not perfect. I think I have done my writing to the best of my ability. Again it is not perfect. I think I need to use the sentence types more. The "that's me - predator-free writing helped a lot.

Do you think NZ citizens should be ripped away from there: homes, country, freedom, and family? Well right now in Afghanistan there is a war and some people in that war are our  NZ citizens. Why are they still there? We can get them out of there, I believe it can be achieved,  if we work together, if we get the government on board,  if we upskill and get out there. Then our people will be happy.  Philippians 2:4 “Let each of you not just look into your own needs, but the needs of others”.

   

Main idea

    This is just getting out of hand, so this is why I believe NZ citizens should have the choice.  

If we don’t get our NZ citizens out now - it’ll be far too late. The horrible, corrupt, terrible Taliban army will start to tower over the world and it will begin to grow and grow. Spreading like the delta disease. Destroying and fighting their own country for all the power and glory. Thanks to the help of all their resources - it has made the job easier. NZ citizens have tried to escape the Taliban group, but have just been pushed back. So I think that it’s right that New Zealand citizens should stand up for themselves - and come home. The government must protect its citizens, they cannot just leave them behind. 

Some people believe that our NZ citizens should stay in Afghanistan. I believe that they should have a free choice on what they want. According to stuff. Co. NZ 80-60 percent would like to come home. So I strongly agree we should listen.  No person deserves to be in a country of destruction, terror, and war - is this where you would like to live? If not then. They should come home.

Lastly,  I believe that New Zealanders are wanting to come home now because they are sick of the: Taliban army, war, fighting, and injustice. I advise that we should listen to them and help them out of this corrupt war. I'm calling on the army and government and anyone who can help. This is a  serious problem that's been going on for decades- it must stop now.

STAYING FIT routine

 It was fun doing all the activities, but I have to admit my cousins were lame and easy to beat. I wished for a better upbringing of their competition and skill. I challenged them to join in but most times I was on my own. I continued to thrive and push myself, to be honest: it was boring but I did it anyway. As you can say I got a break on Thursday as you can see but I was doing my homework so yeah. But I wish for no more locdowns. Not this again lol!

Money/Earnings

It is good to learn about money and things when you are young, so when you get older you know have more responsibility about accounts and saving and more knowledge. Money is not bad its just how you spend it. So be wise with your money.

Persuasive highlights

 I really need more help with the new sentence types because I am kind of not sure what they are. I just need a little more learning. I think we started on them last week? I would give myself to ticks I know what they are I'm just not confident about using them in my writting.

Introduction that has a hook and clearly states opinion or viewpoint

Clear structure (may include subheadings, paragraphs, lead sentences, sequencing words) Summary statement

Quotes, facts, research testimonials (self or others)

Counter-argument

Figurative and emotive language: alliteration, simile, personification, assonance.

New sentence types some; others,     3 bad - question,    if, if, if… then,     the more, the more,  or emotion word (comma) sentence

That’s Me - Predator Free

"An estimated 25 million native birds, eggs, and chicks are cruelly eaten alive by introduced predators every year in New Zealand," Forest &Bird  said. Does this concern you? If so, you are not alone. I believe that we all have a role to play in protecting the native flora and fauna of Aotearoa. 

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Imagine a New Zealand with no thriving, lush bush and  no beautiful, endemic birds: this could become a reality!  Laziness, indifference, business - why are people doing nothing?  Proverbs 12:10 says, ‘a righteous man cares for his animals.’ We must care enough to take action so our threatened species are here for future generations. 

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Some people believe that the Predator Free 2050 ambition is a pie in the sky; I believe it can be achieved. If we work together, if we get our families on board, if we upskill and get out there, then our birds will thrive .  According to Preadatorfreenz.org, areas not under pest management have only  5% of chicks survive. In areas where pests are controlled 50 - 60 % of chicks survive. You see, ordinary people like you are out there; ordinary people, like you, are learning, trapping, monitoring and teaching others. 

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Lastly, the more people doing their part, the more our ecosystems and our people will flourish. By joining our KCS Enviro group you will save species, strengthen ecosystems, make KCS a better place to learn and play and gain life-long  skills. It's us ordinary people that do the extraordinary.  So get on board - let’s be one accord.

The boys character review

This is a nicely written novel called catching falling stars it is written by jk. It is basically about a boy and a girl who move to a foreign little town. They learn to be brave, love and more so if you wanna no more read along.

A character in the novel catching falling stars is Rich who is yet to become a foreigner. This is because the world is at war and London is no longer a safe place for the rich and his sister glory. This essay is going to explain deep feelings for Rich and what is yet to become. 

 Rich is an intriguing character. He was only seven years old when he was drawn away from his family and everything he knew and loved. His home was safe until everything was lost because of air-raids and falling bombs. The world was being engulfed in darkness. day by day. ( The novel is set in 1941) The blitz. The woman ( Miss Saunders) we now live with is cold and unwelcoming, and the village children are just as unfriendly. And even in the country, they are not safe from enemy planes. 

 The main part in this story is when Rich and his sister Glory come to the understanding of why Miss Saunders is: mean, grumpy and nasty. It is because of her past life and the things that happened. Rich then feels sorry for Miss Saunders and they start to talk and discover they have so much in common, but the bad thing is that rich and their sister glory have also been hiding something from Miss Saunders? The children have become friends with them. 

 So, in the end, their parents come to collect them and they don't wanna go home. They wanna stay with Miss Saunders and their friends there they call it home now. Eventually, they get old and life passes on during these dark days and that there is called catching falling stars.

Facts for fun and stuff

 This will explain many of the things that we have been doing in math, like bedma(stands for: brackets, exponents, division, multiplication, addition.

Ehara/ Ae Ranei ?

 This is my it is not and then I tell you what it is. It is not/ it is. It is a good thing learning new moari words instead of saying  kahore now I can say ehara.