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Sunday, November 4, 2018

Adventure forest


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  1. AnonymousNovember 5, 2018 at 3:35 PM

    I like your similes. but the flying fox sentence didn't make sense.

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  2. Lana GiesbersNovember 24, 2018 at 12:36 PM

    Hi Hunia, I agree with Tuini about that sentence. Actually, if you read this do you see a few parts that need extra detail for your readers? The recount is very brief indeed.

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